Mr. Bergey corrected our essays by recording his feedback. I thought it was a great way making us learn from out mistakes because most of us receive our essays without looking at the feedback and without looking for a way to improve our essays, and instead we focus on the final result or grade of our essay. This way of grading makes us improve our writing, because we understand what he is thinking about when he is correcting our essay. 

I also enjoyed this form of correcting our essays because it was different than the usual red-pen marks all over our essay and getting our grade, in this case we listened to the teachers corrections and as we listened we went back in our essays and corrected the mistakes we made. 

I hope this form of writing is continued in the future, because I noticed what I need to work on and I really have to improve my writing, and this is helping.

~ by brenna717 on October 28, 2008.